Sunday, 28 November 2021

Sickening Realization

Hello Readers!

Hello? Anybody there? I hope you didn't get frustrated with my absence this week and have quit reading.  Well, if you're there, then... YAY!  I hope you enjoy this week's exciting installment.

 Page 86
 

 
Page 87

Maybe you thought I didn't post last week 'cause I got sick like Fancy did here!  WOAH!  Looks bad!  I bet you didn't see that coming!

These pages turned out quite well. Good character drawings pretty much across both pages.  Fancy on the bottom right of 87 looks bit too realistic, but that's easily fixed. Looking at these pages I can see the characters would all need a bit of adjustment - Dave's design doesn't quite match Amar nor the woman's design. I think I made those two others a bit too cartoony.
 
I really like the location drawings, especially the really low, distorted image of the house exterior and the tilted panels also help give a sense that something's not right.
 
Believe it or not, the shot into the washroom was fairly challenging in that I wanted to make it clear we were looking into a washroom and that Fancy was sick in there, but I didn't want to clutter it up or make it too obvious.
 
We're (finally) in the home stretch here! 





 

1 comment:

  1. GREAT pages and worth waiting for. I'm thrilled but also a bit sad that we're heading into the home stretch with this story. I don't want it to end!

    Your depiction of Fancy's sickness is very clear. I just have one problem with it: is "KAKK" the right sound effect? Shouldn't it be something more like "SCHPLORP"?


    Illustrated Ghost

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