Sunday 20 September 2020

Landmarks

 'Allo Faithful Readers!

A turbulent week it has been, but yet, I give you... Flight of Fancy, Page 7!!!




















Page 7

Before beginning this page, I knew I was going to need some sort of landmark, something about which the action could happen so the audience (I.G.) could understand who's who and where they are in the environment and in relation to one another. Thus, this mesa that was introduced in the previous page and continued here and in the next pages too.

I like the 2nd panel (bottom right).  I hope the multiple images are clear that they are of one jet seen at various points in time, not 3 different jets.  Looks dynamic and exciting. I also like how that jet's motion connects to the next panel.

Incidentally, this is the second version I did of this page. I don't think the other version worked because I was trying to shoe-horn in some action that I couldn't make clear. It is interesting to come up with ideas and try to make them out. If they work, great, but if they don't, well, I just roll with it and alter the story around it.