tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179757715176757162.post7995798487221335340..comments2023-03-28T13:56:12.826-04:00Comments on Wood Panels: By Way of Exposition...JWoodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01302181568306007311noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179757715176757162.post-75863110156352382682021-02-19T08:24:02.519-05:002021-02-19T08:24:02.519-05:00OKAY!
Forget the art, forget the design -- the st...OKAY!<br /><br />Forget the art, forget the design -- the story is KICKING IN!<br /><br />I see where you're going and I like it. These tests are gonna be great and fun. I cannot wait!<br /><br />Hey, one thing you could take from ol' Hollywood - you could up the stakes for your hero with just a little dialogue tweak, here and there. Maybe, just maybe, you might want to have a few people question Fancy's capability. You know "I request that Fancy be replaced. She can't properly fly anymore", things like that. Then she gets a big redemption moment. You've hinted at this a bit already. Maybe you want to take it a bit further?<br /><br />Maybe?<br /><br />Very psyched for where you're taking us!<br /><br />Illustrated GhostIllustrated Ghosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809519002107930101noreply@blogger.com